Create and deliver a fluent and coherent oral text which develops, sustains, and structures ideas.
Create and deliver a fluent and coherent oral text which develops, sustains, and structures ideas and is convincing.
Create and deliver a fluent and coherent oral text which develops, sustains, and structures ideas and commands attention.
Not Achieved: This piece has a structure that reinforces the message that people should think again about their ideas in relation to euthanasia. There were some good moments of direct address to the audience which strengthened the delivery. The areas that prevented it from reaching achieved were that there were lapses in fluency in the delivery and that its brevity prevented the full development and reinforcement of the ideas in the text.
“Risk! Risk anything! Care no more for the opinions of others, for those voices. Do the hardest thing on earth for you. Act for yourself. Face the truth.”
(Katherine Mansfield)
Not Achieved: This piece has a structure that reinforces the message that people should think again about their ideas in relation to euthanasia. There were some good moments of direct address to the audience which strengthened the delivery. The areas that prevented it from reaching achieved were that there were lapses in fluency in the delivery and that its brevity prevented the full development and reinforcement of the ideas in the text.